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one more step to the edge of the cliff,
one more piece of the puzzle to fit,
one more time i see her face.
one more day in the human race.

one more minuit to the end of school.
one more time i'll break a rule.
one more time i'll fail again
one more time i see my friend.

one more call on my mobile phone.
one more time i hear you moan.
one more text i send to you.
one more love heart pained blue.

one more picture i hold tight.
one more time i hug it all night.
one more tear falls from my eye.
one more time i silently cry.
©2005-2009 ~Deaths-Little-Angel
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ooooh! very nice.

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isn't fair. life is tough. life is cynical. life is harsh. life is real.
life is beautiful.
take pictures.

a picture says a thousand words, a word can describe a thousand pictures. I've got too many of both, probably.
thank you!

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Blessed Be,
*~Natti~*
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! it's describing all of my emotions at once!!! god i miss my boyfriend!!:cries: but this is a wonderful poem!

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My mother said, that all were angels, but i swear, i saw the evil, evil that bleeds from the sky.. (Blue Skin, by Mudvayne)

~Tristesse-Eternelle~
I love her poetry go praise her!!!!!
please take my hand and lead me to salvation...
aww thank you! and thank you very much for the :+fav:
:hug:

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Blessed Be,
*~Natti~*
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your welcomei really like your poetry lots of emotions!!!

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My mother said, that all were angels, but i swear, i saw the evil, evil that bleeds from the sky.. (Blue Skin, by Mudvayne)

~Tristesse-Eternelle~
I love her poetry go praise her!!!!!
please take my hand and lead me to salvation...
thanks

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Blessed Be,
*~Natti~*
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Excellent poem!! I love it as well.
thank you!

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Blessed Be,
*~Natti~*
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your welcome

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My mother said, that all were angels, but i swear, i saw the evil, evil that bleeds from the sky.. (Blue Skin, by Mudvayne)

~Tristesse-Eternelle~
I love her poetry go praise her!!!!!
please take my hand and lead me to salvation...

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